We're deaf as a dodo, can't hear.
We're smart as Trudon, no longer exist.
We're loved and were loved
As much as you.
We're dead under the ground
Like worms in the ground.
You cared and will care,
That's why you put poppies
At our graves.
5 comments:
Good work John
I really liked your poem
The words you used were great i got a great oicture in my head
keep it up John
By Courtney
That is a nice poem, John it explains a lot. So well done!
This is great writing John. You have put a lot of thought into your poem and so created some vivid pictures through your words.
Keep up your blog entries Room 13 and share with us what is happening in your room.
Awesome poem John. I like the way you thought of lots of describing words. Keep it up John!
Nice ANZAC day poem John I could imagine the poem in my head because it was so cool.
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