Tuesday, April 3, 2012

Papakorito Falls


The water gushes down the mammoth drop

The noise drowns out the gasps of amazed children

The foam froths,fighting to escape the branches

The river rushes down the brown dirty bank

Brodee

3 comments:

Jessica Grant said...

Wow Brodee that's an excellent piece of writing. Like your descriptive words. You really put a picture in my mind.

Jada said...

Thats amazing water falls

Anonymous said...

hope you enjoyed it